You’re throwing me again, in this dark cold cave
And here I am pretending to be brave
Even if you’re leading me to my own grave
In your eyes, I am a knave
You really are under her spell
She really is the Queen of Hell!
I wish that someday you’d get out of that cell
Hoping that soon, you will be well..
coldchickensoup 
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Thank you very much 😀
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WOWOWOWIEEE!…you really have a style of your own..strong rhyme…great!
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Huhu imbento ko lang yan dahil di ko naman talaga alam ang mga proper style ng pagsulat ng poems HAHA Salamat!
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dagdag ko pa….minsan lang humirit pero matindi!…keep those poetic lines coming out of your mind to be enjoyed by us!
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Thank you talaga! Grabe naiiyak na tuloy ako ngayon 😥 huhu
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ok lang yan, basta tears of joy…basta itanim mo sa isip mo na may talent ka…hindi mananakaw ng iba!
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(sniff) Salamat talaga! 😥 Hayaan mo gagawin kong motivation sa sarili ko yang mga words of wisdom mo 🙂 Thank you thank you and God Bless 😀
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Great rhyming poem 🙂 I try but don’t go further with rhymes 😀
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Thank you for noticing 🙂 Well, try thinking of words that rhymes with each other first. For example, cat, hat, mat, etc and then you think of a phrase that can connect all the rhyming words that you thought of with each other. Lastly, it’s better if you write poems using your emotions 🙂
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Wow after such a long explanation, you just decided TO HELL WITH IT, write with emotions 😀 I m laughing 😛 But yeah will try for sure 🙂 Thanks for making it easy for me to write rhyming poems !!
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HAHAHA! Yeah! Emotions, it’s the most reliable source for making a poem 😉 can’t wait to read yours! 😀
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Yeah !! Always welcome 😉 Yup emotions are the main ingredient I think so 😀
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Simply lovely
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It was so touching and wonderful! The rhyme was used beautifully well. 🙂
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Thank you for noticing 😀
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I am glad I did 🙂
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Ikaw na talaga madam. May pinaghuhugutan talag ito ba.
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Salamat Madam 🙂
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https://itsmicaejamora.wordpress.com/2015/06/25/book-indulgement-2/
Madam, nakita ko na ung sagot ko for favorite author and books. Stephen J. Cannell of Hollywood Tough. Haha Pasensya dito ko nalang sinagot. 😀
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Okay lang, Madam 🙂
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