These doleful words that you will encounter
Are for my beloved insensitive souls to devour
I didn’t volunteer for this nightmare
No one wants to be in a dark lair
This frigid soul just wants a pinch of your warmth
To be caught by your treacherous arms
You got me but with a slack heart
I’m indecisive and you’re inconsistent,
what a perfect match we are!
Can someone give me a potion?
To forget this petty emotion
To be free from this prison,
Grant me my extradition
You always post such amazing poems!
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Aww, your comment warmed my frigid soul ☺
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I know right?! If only it was that easy- to drink a magic potion and then be free. Well put Nicole ☺. I love the wordings with metaphors about being imprisoned and seeking extradition.
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Thank you for your kind words! This comment made my day ☺
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I like it!
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Thank you Lynz ☺
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The last 3 lines were a perfect ending
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Thank you Charly! 😀
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You´re welcome, it was a real good poem.
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I would like to know what inspired you to write this?
The prison that you describe may mean many types of ‘freedom takers’. It would be interesting to know what exactly this prison is.
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The prison is a person, someone I loved from the past, that I need to break free from…
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Aww I just want to hug you. Lol like lots of warm hugs.
Great piece
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Thank you for your kind words ❤ *hugs back*
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Hey Nicole I bet your almost tired of all the awards but I couldn’t help but nominate you for one more so check out my blog for it
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Reblogged this on poetry and chocolate and books and commented:
This one just strung the right chord there… You are exceptional, Nicole 🙂
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Looking for some inspiration bedtime read before I end my day and I’m glad I stumbled upon this treasure! Thank you for such a well written piece.
Just want to tell you I enjoyed it very much.
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Awww, thank you ❤ Your comment just made my day 😀
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A truly amazing poem.
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