TRUTH BE TOLD

Wake me up in this erroneous dream

Bring me back into the reality of the beam

Blasting the volume of this broken-hearted song

Hoping that I’ll be deaf to my own despair for that long

Trusting is suicidal

Like permanent fatal

I’m choking in my own salty tears

Because I can feel that our ending is near

Maybe one day when we meet again

We can make things right by then

Published by Nicole

Trying to write a book before I turn 30...

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  1. Ameena k.g says:
    June 24, 2015 at 9:53 pm

    Knowing the end is inevitable is not exactly a great feeling. You do describe that very well!

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    1. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
      June 26, 2015 at 3:35 am

      Thank you 🙂

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  2. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
    June 25, 2015 at 2:55 am

    Thank you 😊

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  3. thefeatheredsleep says:
    June 26, 2015 at 1:13 am

    Very well written

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    1. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
      June 26, 2015 at 3:34 am

      Thank you 🙂

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  4. willytyme says:
    June 26, 2015 at 8:38 am

    I like the way it represents them having a second chance at things despite the tragic ending. Very descriptive, a very good read.

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    1. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
      June 26, 2015 at 12:19 pm

      Thank you 🙂

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  5. Darshith Badiyani says:
    July 8, 2015 at 2:53 pm

    Nicole you’re making it all rhyming not only in words but also but also I am able to rhyme your juncture of life with mine 🙂 I am myself here 😀

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    1. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
      July 9, 2015 at 4:59 am

      Aww, thank you for this comment 🙂 This made my day 🙂

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      1. Darshith Badiyani says:
        July 9, 2015 at 5:45 am

        Hoping we both make through this testing time 😉

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      2. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
        July 9, 2015 at 10:58 am

        Yes, we’ll make it!

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  6. Ministry of Fashion Affairs says:
    July 26, 2015 at 10:34 pm

    Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.

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    1. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
      July 27, 2015 at 4:05 am

      Welcome and thank you also for your thoughtful comment 😊

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  7. Smiling Notes says:
    November 20, 2015 at 1:25 pm

    You write so beautifully!! You are really talented!

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    1. Nicole Alexandra Chua says:
      November 20, 2015 at 11:16 pm

      Thank you so much ❤

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